Writing Conevntioin

1. she claims she was playing Frisbee with her Friends at the park when the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no were the police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.

- She claims she was playing frisbee with her friends at the park, when the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no where . The police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.

2. Today i finished my News Report , that i did on Thursday ; but now im workin on this .

- Today I finished my News Report, that I did on Thursday. But now I'm woking on this.

3. It didnt change my mind but i think of high school better.

- It's didn't change my mind but I think of High School better

4. I did not watch the hole movie.

- I did not watch the whole movie.

5. i do not like to writ books or paragraph.

- I do not like to write book or paragraghs.

6. actually i found the movie very entertaining cause i understanded all of it.

- Actually, i found the movie very entertaining cause I understanded all of it.

7. I think theyre targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.

- I think they're targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hangover and people who loves comedy.

8. pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.

- Pilot ejected him from a SouthWest Airlines Flight from Oakland to Burbank,California saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.

9. I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.

- I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.

10. I dont write that much but im prety confident about my ability.

- I don't write that much bout i'm pretty conident about my ability.

11. The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it show us that
anyone can write.

-The reason why I think Mrs.Martin and Mr.Pierce chose this film because it shows us that anyone can write.

12. Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other

-Yes, because it shows that anyone can do what they want if they try abd different ethnic group can be friends with eachother.

13. I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then i ran outta time , so just a few minutes ago i just finished it.

- I did start it Thursday afternoon, but then I ran outta time, so just a few minutes ago I just finish ed it.

14. I hope i have a better english experience using the computers.

-I hope I have a better engish experience using the computers.

15. The movie i enjoy most is The Hang Over it was histarical.

- The movie I enjoy most is The HangOver, it was hihstarical.